Recently I finished reading Jeffrey Archer's Kane & Abel. Pretty good book. I think it needed some fine tuning. Like in this conversation between Kate & William:
Kate: William, I am pregnant
William: When did I find time for that
Kate: (Smiles)
My version:
Kate: William, I am pregnant
William: When did I find time for that
Kate: You didn't, its not yours!
William: (thud!)
Revised version is better than original....Keep posting
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